Tunes for Tuesday: Shake Some Action

There was a short part in the draft just hanging around without doing much, so I folded it into the previous scene and squeezed in a small, funny moment in the process. Hopefully this new arrangement works out better.

I think the editing and rewriting of the past month have tightened my plot up, and one character feels more polished now. The folks who read my earliest chapters responded well to him, which made me feel like he deserved a little better out of me.



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